Memoirs on the Passions of Lifethey abound in every moment
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Original: 4/14/2006 1:00 PM
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Friday, April 14, 2006

 It's hard to write in your head, walking
under steel bridges, the dog pulling, listless,
to his own poetic endeavors ... your eyes
dribbling with tears ... forgetting the lines.

Not so easy, either, sitting in a train watching
Girls who watch other men, over the margins
of books, whose pages never turn, whose lonely
word remain unread and idle.

What should a poem say, after all, when
the greatest poets are the cruelest liars?
When will a poem earn the distinction, the honor,
the right to be shot and killed in the streets?

No, not easy to write at home, unless your hand sobs
in ink, only when it should be doing something productive.
A true poet will be read by everyone, when he dies,
But understood only by strangers and lovers ...

Because they are also lonely, and all so useless.
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*squeals*
yay
i looove it!
Posted 4/17/2006 3:18 PM by Mountain_Bandie - reply

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sorry about that last comment
i had to go and hit the submit button...
i really enjoy it
it tells the truth so harshly
it's very raw
in a very good way
sort of like raw sushi
very tasty...
Posted 4/19/2006 5:28 PM by Mountain_Bandie - reply

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hmm yes i know kids are used in war i am not as idealist as you would preceive me to be i just disagree with it whole hartedly...and whilst i take your critiqu of me and think of it remember that I was angry I am sick of the war I am sick of my country because of the simple fact that it chooses to let this happen, though i know it will never happen in my lifetime and if it ever does well then my whole Ideology is shot, you may see me as niave many have but i still find it sick to see the pictures of kids writing things on warheads that is what I am upset about that group of pictures....whilst it may of been a way to greive i don't know the true story behind the kids and i never claim to of but still what we do to childern in this world sickens me it almost drives me to not want to have an offspring, and I mean no disrespect to KungFu or you, it is just my opinion are we not entitled to our opinion...
Posted 8/1/2006 4:12 AM by ashadowofthought - reply


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