Memoirs on the Passions of Lifethey abound in every moment
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Original: 8/14/2006 8:44 PM
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Monday, August 14, 2006

 Haifa, July 26, 2006

My friend took a bowl today,
with soapy loving hands he washed
his white shoes, didn't hear the warplanes
flying overhead, roaring overhead.

His shoes were as white as the fluffy clouds
That hid the rockets falling on the city
Just a half an hour's walk from wher eI sleep.
People slept and died, as I awoke, afraid.

His shoes ran him to the shelters each time
The sirens tore into our lives ... he was
Proud to scrub at dusty laces that may yet
Save his life, and take him underground.

He's lucky, my friend, his shoes as cruelly
White as the sky ... sneakers, like clouds
That take him far away. He's lucky because
for his work, he earns the right to fly.

But I must look to the clouds for hope,
As I was taught to all my life
And I must look in fear as I was taught
by just two weeks of war.

And I will ponder the strange sameness
Of a bomb shelter and a grave,
And think of my war, the sirens, the clouds,
The fear, beautiful Haifa,

And my friend, squatting on the floor
of our balcony, polishing his dusty wings.
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Nick - I don't know what to say, but your poems are powerful - and the more so because they are real. Of course all your work has something of a profound depth of soul to it that is rare to me, but this recent one makes sense...... - chilling sense.
I'm sure sure if that comment made any sense, but oh well. btw, I just recently got Xanga - this is Tracy....
Posted 8/15/2006 2:58 PM by TheCognoscenti - reply

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It was an indescribably perfect gift to be scrolling through xangas and find that you had updated while I wasn't looking.  Your poetry always feels to me like the deepest revelations of your heart, and I treasure being able to share in that as easily as checking a silly web page.  I'm thinking of you, hoping for your safety, and smiling at all the wonders I'm sure you're enjoying even amidst such unfortunate circumstances.

Posted 8/23/2006 11:32 PM by JessToddy - reply

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Yeah the name Nick Naroditsky rings a bell. haha. You're in Haifa eh? Awesome. Just watch out for anything long and hard flying towards your direction. Okay, that didn't sound right at all.
Posted 9/4/2006 8:58 AM by TheKungFuRabbi - reply


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